I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nicely presented Bryce The background is very effective to catch my attention, but still easy to read your work. Nice touch adding the Simpsons character too, always good to entertain kyour readers. Keep sharing so we can keep reading!!
Hello Bryce. Thanks for sharing another blog with us.Just remember a sentence needs a full stop.I like that your page isn't over crowded.It's easy to read.Well done.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Nicely presented Bryce
ReplyDeleteThe background is very effective to catch my attention, but still easy to read your work.
Nice touch adding the Simpsons character too, always good to entertain kyour readers.
Keep sharing so we can keep reading!!
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ReplyDeleteHello Bryce.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing another blog with us.Just remember a sentence needs a full stop.I like that your page isn't over crowded.It's easy to read.Well done.