Hello you cool readers,
This term we are learning to make a strong narrative. it has to be believable consistent descriptive and a strong structure
Yesterday we were learning show and not tell.We had to look into thesaurus for the wake action words and we had to make the strong word.
Here is the thesaurus
This is how we did it:
Here is a week action work sentence: Al gave Miss D coffee.
This is a sentence we changed: Al awarded Miss D with a hot delicious cappuccino.
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