Today we will be showing you what we have been doing in term two writing. This term we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is believable,descriptive and consistent. We ca describe the setting and the characters. Today we did sick sentences. we changed boring sentences into strong sentences. I have not finished it yet take is the Favourite bit that I wrote. Here it is.
when she went in she was not in the nether she was back on her horse and her mother was in the attic when she vanist back. Her mother looked at her back in the horues when she was ment to be in her bed.
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