I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Bryce, It's great to see your blogs popping up.It was really hard to read because of your dark background! I think if you added 'so you would be refreshed' to your sentence it would be perfect, because you would be using the word in your sentence. Well done. :)
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Bryce,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see your blogs popping up.It was really hard to read because of your dark background!
I think if you added 'so you would be refreshed' to your sentence it would be perfect, because you would be using the word in your sentence.
Well done. :)