Intro: ( Who, what, when, where, why )
My mum did a hunt for candy for my family and we had to find the candy and the candy we did it
on halloween whose in the coach house and we
dont three pieces of candy
we had fan at the end becomes my mum told my dad to get candy from the shop.
on halloween whose in the coach house and we
dont three pieces of candy
we had fan at the end becomes my mum told my dad to get candy from the shop.
P1: (what , why )
my mum told my dad to get candy from the shop and the candy whose delisis.
P2: ( what, why )
My mum did not tall as what we are doing and it whos fan and the candy was in the coach house
and it was the candy and my baby went in the coach house.
and it was the candy and my baby went in the coach house.
P3: ( what, why )
My mum told my dad to get the candy on halloween and only one posin not on the door.
Conc: ( refer to the intro, connect to the audience with a personal comment) at the end of the hunt
for the candy we got three pieces of candy and it was fan and the candy was good and one of the
canyons was mint.
for the candy we got three pieces of candy and it was fan and the candy was good and one of the
canyons was mint.
that is my waiting and leve me a comment and bye.
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