Today I am going to tell you about my writing that I did. It tock my a long thing it is not done. Onomatopoeia is a word that describes a sound. Here it is.
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You are a child on the track.What are you hearing? Write a list of all the things that you might be hearing.
yalling : aaaaaaa
Breathing : Hhh , hhh , hhh
Stomping : thumping
Shoting : bang
Commentator, voice: yar
Wind rushing past: whsssss
People cheering for you: ,whoooo!’ whoo hoo’
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Turn each word on your list into a sentence.
There was people Yelling in the stadeim, ‘aaaaaaa!’
The kids were Breathing heavily in the track, ‘Hhh , hhh , hhh!’
The kids were Stomping on the track, ‘thumping!’
The gun Shooting made a, ‘bang!’
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The kids lined up on the track and I was about to go. I heard the bang of the gun and as we went I could hear thumping of the kids running. The people in the stadium started to yell and cheer. “Aaaaaaaaaa” and “go go go go go” to the kids
Thank you for reading my post you may comment if you want
Hello Bryce.
ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to seeing your work unfortunately I can't read it as it is going cross the page.Can you please change it so it goes downwards?.
Thank you.Have a great week.