Today I am going to tell you about my topic I we are doing this term. it is about the matariki stars. Here it is.
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Hi Bryce I really like you image and I think its really cool and creative I think maybe you could put a capital letter for the title Matarkiki also maybe next time you could make more of a story but other then that its sooo amazing keep up the good work:)
ReplyDeleteKIA ORA BRYCE
ReplyDeleteI think you should put more characters in the other scenes cause they are empty.
But I like the characters and scenes that you picked.
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