2020-2021 Kick Start Art

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I am going to tell you what this is. This is the  summer Learning Journey  it is the kick start. My class had to colour in a picture and put it in a template.

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ballet poem

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Today I am going to so you  the poem that I did it today. It was fun to do and quit easy. It tock me quit a ling time to do the pictures and the colour of the wiring to and the background. the resin why I am doing this is because we are going to the ballet of Friday. my poem is made by simile here it is.

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topic of social sciences

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Today I am going to tell you about our topic it is social sciences it was on a slide. it did not tack me that long to do. It was really fan to do and we got to put some pictures in the slide.  There was seven slides to do . Here it is.

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reading

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Today I am going to yell you about reading this tom.  The Book that we  are reading is named holes we are needing to get up to chapter 12 to  finish off a task that my teacher wanted us to do.

here is the task.

1. Do​ ​you​ ​think​ ​Caveman​ ​is​ ​a​ ​good​ ​nickname​ ​for​ ​Stanley?​ ​Why?​ ​Did​ ​he​ ​like​ ​it?  Yes  because the boys said the he is the one `1`

2. Do​ ​you​ ​think​ ​it​ ​is​ ​wise​ ​for​ ​Stanley​ ​to​ ​lie​ ​to​ ​his​ ​mother​ ​about​ ​camp?​  no not wise he shod tall his mam

3. What​ ​would you​ ​do​ ​if​ ​you​ ​were​ ​in​ ​his​ ​situation?​ ​Why? Tall my mam and my dad that I am going to camp green lake

4. ​Why​ ​do​ ​the​ ​boys​ ​always​ ​line​ ​up​ ​for​ ​water​ ​in​ ​the​ ​same​ ​order?​ ​ xray is the leder and zero has to be in the back

5. What’s​ ​the significance​ ​to​ ​this​ ​order?

6. Why​ ​is​ ​Mr​ ​Pendanski​ ​asking​ ​the​ ​boys​ ​what​ ​they​ ​want​ ​to​ ​do​ ​with​ ​their​ ​life?​ ​

7. Mr​ ​Pendanski​ ​tells​ ​Stanley,​ ​“You​ ​messed​ ​up​ ​your​ ​life,​ ​and​ ​it’s​ ​up​ ​to​ ​you​ ​to​ ​fix it.”​ ​Do​ ​you​ ​agree​ ​with​ ​this?

8. What​ ​did​ ​Stanley​ ​find?​ ​

9. What​ ​does​ ​X-Ray​ ​ask​ ​Stanley​ ​to​ ​do?​ ​

10. Why​ ​does​ ​Stanley agree​ ​to​ ​this?​ ​

11. What​ ​would​ ​you​ ​have​ ​done?

12. Were​ ​you​ ​surprised​ ​to​ ​discover​ ​that​ ​the​ ​Warden​ ​is​ ​a​ ​woman?​ ​

13. What​ ​else​ ​do​ ​you find​ ​out​ ​about​ ​the​ ​Warden​ ​in​ ​this​ ​chapter?

14. ​Do​ ​you​ ​think​ ​Zigzag​ ​and​ ​the​ ​other​ ​campers​ ​are​ ​correct​ ​in​ ​believing​ ​that​ ​the Warden​ ​is​ ​always​ ​watching​ ​them,​ ​or​ ​are​ ​they​ ​just​ ​being​ ​paranoid?

15. What do you think it's like being sent to Camp Green Lake? Do you think it will help the kids be better people in the future? Explain?

Here is the book that I am reading.

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Fixing The Amazing Surface Features

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Today I am going to tell you about the writing that I have done there's week. The writing was about how to fix  surface features. Surface features are little bit of the writing that is not correct. We have to fix the word that have to many repetitive word. Surface features are the rules of writing that we use to make words and sentences. A example: thissentsachulymakessen zbuttisrellyhrd to reed. 

On the room nine site our teacher put a link to a story ans we had to make a copy to find the end of the sentences.  We would have to put capital letters after the full stop. To find the end of the sentences we had to find a new idea. 

After we put the full stop's we had to highlight then most repeated words. It sounds better if it done not sounds the same. One of the words that we highlighted is he. We change he with a name that we get to cheese.

yesterday we read through it all together and editor paragraph. we got some people up front to read the story. Xavier, Rinaz and Sean were the people up front of our class room.

This is not my story this is someone else's we just had to fix the surface features. This is what we had to fix:

He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder he tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. Mums had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us maybe he was one of them looking for revenge but why would he come. mum would just move and how did he find us we live on the other side of the planet from where all of mums boyfriends were so how could he find us he might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of the devises ‘Hello where are you I know your here you're going to tell me where you're mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies so which will it be death or freedom you have 10 seconds chose wisely’.

 This is the changes that I did.

Draco Malfoy kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder. He tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed. He  was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. 

Mum has had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us. Maybe he was one of them looking for revenge, but why would he come?Mum would just move. How did he find us? We live on the other side of the planet from where all of mum's boyfriends were. So how could he find us? Harry potter might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one or her  devices. 

“Hello, where are you? I know you're here. You’re going to tell me where your mother is. Or you shall join your father...  In the skies. So which will it be, death or freedom! You have ten seconds to choose wisely.”

Can you see the changes that we made?

I hope you have learnt how to change surface features too and make your writing stronger. can you spot the changes and comment on them in the comment section? Thank you for vising my blog today. I hope you have a good day today.

Witing

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Today I am going to tell you about the wiring that I have been doing this week. We had to do Descriptive Writing. Here is my wiring.

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word of the week

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Today I am going to tell you about the word of the week. This week we got to choose our own word of the week 

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swimming

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Today I am going to tell you about swimming this term.

 I am in the big pool with Xavier Jade Zahina Liyhan Isaac. We have been learning how to do back stroke free style and to see if we do not need to use the ground. The challenges is not to touch the bottom of the pool. It is geting  easyer but there is one that I need to learn: how to listen.

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word of the week

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Today I am going to tell you about my word of the week and the word was bemused. Here is the work that I did. This was a new word for me. We have been learning about bemused.

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amazing writing

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Today I am going to tell you about my writing that I have gone so far  it is not  done but  it will be done soon. we are using language features in our writing.

This week we have deleted the back ground and mad the boxes smaller and put numbes next to the writing.

This is the first one that I did

This is the second one that I did

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holes

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Today I am  going to tell you what we are doing for reading. My book is called Holes.  Holes is when you are being naughty and you have to go to Camp Green Lake to dig some holes so you are a good boy. I think that the prisoner is going to hit the guard in the head and run away and do some more naughty stuff.
Here is a link to holes

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