Football is so cool
Football is the best ball game
It is fun to play
Thank you for reading my blog post and you my comment on it if you want to you can.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Good morning Bryce.I am guessing that in Japan,they play a lot of football.Is that why you wrote about it?Just remember that when you put a full stop in your writing,the next letter becomes a capital?
ReplyDeleteMorning Bryce!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year’s Summer Learning Journey team. I am working with Mikey and will be commenting on some of your posts throughout summer. :) It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog. It’s great to see that you have started off strong!
Wow, japan sounds like a very interesting country! Is Japan somewhere that you would like to visit one day?
Great poem! It can be tricky making the 5,7,5 syllable pattern but you have done it perfectly. :)
Keep up the great blogging work!
Gabe