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Wednesday 18 September 2019

Haiku

hello it is Bryce from hornby primary school. this blog  is about  Haiku. Haiku is a poem is from japan. japan is a conterey that is so small it has so many people on it. the people are so cool because they can speck different language. here is a photo of a haiku.



Football is so cool
Football is the best ball game
It is fun to play

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2 comments:

  1. Good morning Bryce.I am guessing that in Japan,they play a lot of football.Is that why you wrote about it?Just remember that when you put a full stop in your writing,the next letter becomes a capital?

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  2. Morning Bryce!

    My name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year’s Summer Learning Journey team. I am working with Mikey and will be commenting on some of your posts throughout summer. :) It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog. It’s great to see that you have started off strong!

    Wow, japan sounds like a very interesting country! Is Japan somewhere that you would like to visit one day?

    Great poem! It can be tricky making the 5,7,5 syllable pattern but you have done it perfectly. :)

    Keep up the great blogging work!

    Gabe

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