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Wednesday 24 February 2021

Pobble

 Hello readers,

Today I am going to tall you about a pobble  that I have done. it was a crow on a clock with a key in the moth I thort that the key would open the clock. Here it is.



Question time!

What do you think the key is for? To unlock a portal to a different dimension. Why do you think the girl is so desperate to have it? So the crow can not go in the secret dimension

Why do you think the crow has taken the key? To get in the secret portal. 

How did the clock get there?the clock was hiding under the leves Is it significant in the story?

What do you think the crow is thinking?where is the key ment to be

Where have all the leaves on the ground come from? The inside of the clock

Story starter!

She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it.

Time was ticking. Time was running out. She tiptoed towards the creature, seeing the precious key it held precariously in its sharp, cruel beak. It let out an irritating, throaty cackle, its soot-black wings ruffling gently as it manoeuvred itself on top of the clock; it was ready to take flight.

Knowing she might only have a few seconds before her opportunity disappeared, she took another cautious step forward. Time seemed to slow, her body tingled in excitement and her heart thudded in her chest. It was now or never…

Can you continue the story?

I am doing to kill you are the wost thing in the would I am going to chas you intoll you die. It took the clock in  the portol so I had to run in

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