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Friday, 24 April 2020

Narrative 1

Hello it is Bryce from Hornby primary. Today I'm going to post some narrative plans that I have done this week while in lock down.




Narrative: Let’s Write
Beginning:
Where is the character?
Who is the character?
What is the time and place where your story starts?
I was at a party and my friend sent a
  random person that gave me a present 
Problem 1:
What problem begins to happen?
Don’t fix this problem yet...
The present was tall and  skinny
Problem 2:
How does the situation get worse?
Don’t fix this problem yet...
When the cake is brought out I can
hear a ticking noise
Climax:
What is the worst that could happen?
The cake blow up and it was in my
face it hurt so bad   my face was red
after the cake exploded in my face
Resolution:
What happens to solve the problems?
The present had a water gun in it and we
had a huge big water fight 
Ending:
What happens at the end?
How does everything work out?
Everyone had a great time and went
home clean of cake
Thank you for reading my blog and you may comment
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5 comments:

  1. Mrs Cassidy24 April 2020 at 11:44

    Hello Bryce.You have got some interesting ideas for your story.I can't wait for the finished product.What did the random person look like?.Where the water guns used to clean the people?.What flavour was the cake?.So many questions....Have a great week and take care.I look forward to your next piece of work.Thanks for blogging:)

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  2. Diane24 April 2020 at 11:56

    Hi Bryce, I have enjoyed your planning! I wonder who put the device in the cake? I hope the you weren't injured too badly!
    That would be a fun way to get clean! Thank you for blogging. See you after the long weekend. :)

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  3. Miss D24 April 2020 at 14:40

    Good man for getting you blog post up! Great to hear from you Bryce and well done for following through!

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  4. Mrs Day24 April 2020 at 15:49

    Hi Bryce, good story plan.
    I like how everything follows thru for a great conclusion. You have a bit of suspense with the mysterious person giving you a gift, then humour with the water fight and getting clean. Will make an interesting story.
    Thanks for sharing your work

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  5. Mrs Cassidy27 April 2020 at 20:52

    Hello Bryce.Just wishing you a happy week.I can't wait to see what other work you have been working on.
    Take care and keep safe.All the best.

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